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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

As you placed this into the NoMercy folder that means you want a brutally honest Critique from #thephotographyunion

The sky in this shot is wonderfully done. Usually black and white skies are done poorly. The sky also appears almost to be moving, if it is glanced at quickly.

Despite the wonderful sky, the rest of th photograph could use some work. The water in the fountain looks almost flat, because this is shot in B/W. The subject of the photo is also centered too much, it should have been positioned closer to one of the side edges of the frame.

The perspective is nice though, with the fountain in the foreground, the stairs and people in the mid-ground and the building in the background.

Hope this feedback helps.
-Member of #thephotographyunion's critique team.